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Tarahi Mushaira: Results |
Here are the results of tarhi mushayera for
March. We have chosen few ghazals and nazmz,
hopefully you'll like our picks. The
two nazmz we received this month are probably the best nazmz we havereceived
since we started the mushayera. Just a reminder that if you are sending
a ghazal, please keep it short. No more than 9 ashaars.
And thanks for sharing such beautiful thoughts
with us!
Good luck for April.
The picture for march was "naqsh-e-paa"
The Inspiration |
And the
Judges are:
-Aazim
Kohli
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| And here are the selected entries ... in no particular order |
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mitay nahiN haiN sehra se qadmoN ke nishaaN ab tak tu yaad na karta ho ga shayed mujhay lekin main teri talaash meN bhatakta hooN jahaaN jahaaN ab tak goonjati hai khamosh fizaaoN meN ab bhi sada meri naqsh-pa sunaate haiN meri justujoo ki dastaaN ab tak gham na kar jo guzra tu aabla pa tapte sehra se bekhabar ishq ke haiN baqi kayee imtehaaN ab tak milta jo tujh bin koyee charah-gar is aazar ka kyuN dasht-o-dasht phirta maiN be-darmaaN ab tak |
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ban gayi naqsh e paa rah guzar rait par (this sher is inspired by the pic) aik tasveer dikhla ke uss ne kaha chaahiye ik ghazal tum se rait per (this sher for the organizers) maiN urhanooN ke qaabil jo na rah saka tu hawa phir rahy der ba der rait par tera daman mussar hua hi nahiN ho gaye mere aansoo gohar rait par meri fitrat thi khaaki nasal dar nasal ba-khushi ker liya yuN baser rait par tu nay jo bhi hawa se kaha, hogaya mera likha raha, be-asar rait par tere haathoN ki mehdi lage iss tarah jaise chamke kiran ba-saher rait par mere ashaar qirtaas par yuN lagay jaise chhalka ho khooN e jigar rait par jaane farrukh ki batoN meN tha kya assar ke simat aaye sare bhaNwar rait par |
Farrukh
Abbas
Ahmed Faraz, Mohsin Naqwi farrukhjii@aol.com |
| tanhayon
ke alam meN
khamoshi ke saagar meN khaabon ke saahil pe main aksar dhoondha karti hon uss ko woh!
woh!
woh!
woh!
woh!
woh!
woh!
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Arshia Aftab
Mirza Ghalib, Ahmed Faraz,
Parveen Shakir
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socha nahiN tha bicharhna parhe ga tanha bhi raahoN pe chalna parhe ga go tum ko yaqeeN aa na paye ga lekin waadoN ko poora to karna parhe ga girwi jo rakkha hai ham ne yooN khud ko anna ko bhi apni masalna parhe ga ban ke kiran tum bikhar to rahey ho umr bhar yooN tum ko chamakna parhe ga yeh bhoola hua ham ko jaane hai kab se aayeene ko ab to badalna parhe ga mere ghar meN aakar na khooN se naha lo khwaaboN ki kirchiyoN ko chun'na parhe ga chaand ko gunahgaar duniya na samjhe baadaloN se uss ko nikalna parhe ga |
Naushad Khan Chaand
Ahmed Faraz, Parveen Shakir,
Basheer Badar
aanu22-@saudionline.com.sa |
| dil mera
pa kar uss ka peyaar ban gaya hai aik bheegaa sehra yaadeN uss ki aksar
badi naadaaN haiN
mujhko kaanoN kaan
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mere jeewan meN kabhi ,i tne andhaire to na the apni khamoshi se khud maiN ne machayaa hai yeh shor mujh ko shak thaa ke kahiN aap bhi ,behre to na the "jo bhi guzraa hai koi ,dewtaa hoga warnaa rait maiN naqhsh e kaf e paa kabhi tehre to na the" dil ke jazbaat ab pehre bithaa do lailaa warnaa khawahish ke gird ,aise katehre to na the |
Laila Sheeraz Mirza Ghalib lailaasheeraaz@yahoo.com |
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woh khushiyon ka hansta jahaan chhod aaye safar ke liye aashiyaan chhod aaye jahaan hum ne dil men safar ki thi thaanii waheen fikr-e suud-o-zayaan chhod aaye farebon ke jo ghar bhi aabaad the woh ghar fuunk daale dhuaan chhod aaye guzarte hue waqt kii ret par qadam ke hum apne nishaan chhod aaye jahaan ssans lena tha mushkil bahut zameen chhod dii aasmaan chhod aaye jahaan der tak rukna mumkin na tha wahaan apni hum daastaan chhod aaye jo insaan ghum se pareshaan the hansaaya unhen shaadmaan chhod aaye mile the jo aqdaar aslaaf se unhen hum na jaane kahaan chhod aaye jahaan dil lagaane men ruswaiyan thiin woh dar aur woh aastaan chhod aaye jo dil ko hamaare lubhaata bahut tha bahaaron ka dilkash samaan chhod aaye na majboor kar den kahiin un ke aansoo yehii soch kar hum makaan chhod aaye guzarna tha humko guzar hii gaye magar yaad ka kaarvaan chhod aaye akele safar par chale Shaikh jii sabhii hum-sukhan hum-zabaan chhod aaye |
Nazrul Hasan Shaikh Hafeez Jalandhari nazrulhasan@yahoo.com |
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tum nay bhi kbhi apna tow jana hi nahi tha. kia karta akela maiN sajakar koi mehfil.
dil nay tow bohat chaha mager kistarah jeetay.
mur mur kay dekhta raha maiN umer bher magar.
ik rasta bacha tha wo bhi lotnay ka tha.
ab jhuk kay mery lash ko jhinjhor rahay ho.
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khanjee35@hotmail.com Faraz |
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zamaane ke darr se tum darr jaaya na karo dil ko patthar ki terha rakhna mere yaar ise sheeshe ki terha tum sajaaya na karo hai.n gham abhi to buht se manzil tak har modh pe yoo.n aansoo bahaaya na karo kamzor na padh jaayei.n kadam chalte-chalte guniya ke diye gham dil se lagaaya na karo khabar padh jaati hai jab, dil doob jaata hai gar dard ho koi, tum itna muskuraaya na karo hai.n imtihaa.n buht se, hai.n mushkilei.n buht si par mai.n saath-saath hoo.n, yeh bhulaaya na karo |
Gulzar Sahab poonam_parmar@hotmail.com |
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door-door tak tere kadmoN ke nishaaN nazar aate haiN tum aashiq-e-gulshan the to itni to khabar rakhte ke rukhsat hi hue the tum aur gul pareshaaN nazar aate haiN chashm-e-duniya meiN to fitrat hai meri raqeeboN vaali is raqeeb ke dil meiN to dekh, ulfat ke toofaaN nazar aate haiN meri gali se voh guzre haiN yooN na-aashna se ban kar par ghussa bhi nahiN aata ke itne naadaN nazar aate haiN jab zinda the hum, usne ashk tak aankhon ke na dekhe ab mar gaye haiN to meri mazaar pe pashemaaN nazar aate haiN |
Mirza Ghalib RajuMinhas@hotmail.com |
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yeh woh rasta hay jahan dasht hay sahra hay" jis ki ulfat ko hum nay orhha tha badan pay wohi aaj humara bewafa sanam bhi thehra hay hum to intizaar kay aadi ho chalay thay janaN saath denay ka waada tum nay hi torha hay yaadon ki galiyon say aaj bhi hum guzartay to hon gay tu awaaz hi na pehchanay to kiya qusoor mera hay humari aankhon mein aaj bhi khaab sajtay hain humaray aangan mein aaj bhi khushbooyon ka daira hay ik hi pal mein toot gaye barson kay yaranay to kiya moti hon tujhay mubarak yeh aansoo phir bhi mera hay aarzo´on kay jungle mein umeedein toot chuki hain humara koi nahin jahan mein sirf andhera hay dhalnay lagi rafta rafta dhoop´e khayal´e yaar bhi lagta hay honay wala nayee umeed ka sawaira hay kiya poochtay ho haal humari ibadat ka aye Ajnabi hum nay apna har sajda usi kay naam rakh chorha hay |
Ghalib,Faraz & Javed Akhtar urooj@urdustan.com |
| Woh meraa naam le rahi hogi
Khud pe ilzaam le rahi hogi . Bin mere beqaraar hogi par,
Phir naa mujhase yun ruthane ki qasam,
"Kuchh qadam chal ke gili mitti main
Apane allah se maang kar mere
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Raj Ji
maha_raj@yahoo.com Gulzar |